Upon a second viewing of "Becoming Jane"

I first saw Becoming Jane about a week ago with my very talented and intelligent, if somewhat persnickety, theater-trained actor friend Michael. I was, I must admit, largely disappointed, having read the excellent and exhaustively researched 2003 biography, Becoming Jane Austen, by Jon Spence, who served as Historical Consultant on the film. So Michael and I spent much of the movie rolling our eyes and snickering at it. However, I felt it deserved better attention than I gave it on a first try, so I decided to sit through it again, without the interference of Michael's overactive criticsim.

To be fair, I don't blame Michael entirely for my negative reception of the movie. I came to it with high expectations, because the main premise is without a doubt borrowed from Spence's thesis but, apart from the supposed relationship between Jane Austen and Tom Lefroy, bears no resemblance to Spence's quite original and effectively supported conjecture.

Of note, I liked Becoming Jane much better the second time, after discarding my preconceived notions of its failure to stick faithfully to Spence's thesis. Let me just make this clear, however: my initial (as well as an any residual) disappointment had nothing to do with historical accuracy, as we must concede both the movie and Jon Spence's book are, in fact, speculation. Spence's speculation at least is supported by his research into family documents, letters, and first hand accounts, subject though they may be to interpretation and memory.

At any rate, as a fiction, a story, on second viewing I thought Becoming Jane was no less amusing and entertaining than 2005's Pride & Prejudice, and in certain places more so (Michael will sneer but I don't care).

I will first address my objections to the film, which are largely these:

1. The blatant exploitation of the popularity of Pride & Prejudice by attempting to make practically every character and relationship in Jane Austen's life analogous with the characters and relationships therein.

To wit: Mrs. Austen, Jane's mother, is portrayed as a Mrs. Bennet-type, skillfully managing her preacher husband's impecunious household while diligently working to get her younger daughter married off to the heir of the local dowager-cum-Lady Catherine, Lady Gresham. The neighboring family's silly daughter, Lucy Lefroy, Tom's cousin, is given essentially Lydia Bennet's characteristics and John Warren is obviously Mr. Collins.

In their first scene together on screen, Jane overhears Tom speak slightingly of a piece she has just finished reading for the amusement of the assembled, reminiscent of Darcy's arrogant remark that Elizabeth was "tolerable but not handsome enough to tempt me." And at their first ball together, Jane abuses the arrogant Mr. Lefroy behind his back for refusing to dance when there were so few men to begin with, after which he rises to the occasion and begs that she favor him with the next two dances.


Coming on the heels of the 2005 feature film adaptation, in addition, this parallelism smacks strongly of a failure of original thought. It cannot escape the appearance of mimicry. Of course, spun favorably, I can allow it to be both an homage to her most enduring novel and a biographical conjecture on her life derived from a reading of the work. But as a theme of analysis of her work, it's unoriginal and it diminishes her art. And that I cannot forgive.




2. Lack of focus on the essential conflict of the story. My friend Michael is of the opinion that the central conflict of the film Becoming Jane is the unfulfilled romantic attachment between Jane Austen and Tom Lefroy but does not effectively rear its ugly head until well more than halfway into the movie. I think other observers would disagree with my friend, as there are certainly many indications throughout the first half of the movie that there will be difficulty in the fruition of a marriage between Jane and Tom due to a variety circumstances, not the least of which is a lack of money on both sides. But I will save this discussion for later, when I address what I do like about the film.

For this criticsim, I will state my decided preference: Becoming Jane should be about the penniless young woman of Regency England who has no means of supporting herself other than (and will become a burden on her family otherwise) to marry but cannot bring herself to do so unless it is for love. In addition to that stipulation, she also wants to write and harbors mild hopes (at least as present in the film) of being able to earn her keep by writing. Contrary to the long-standing picture of Jane Austen as the taciturn, old-spinster daughter of a small town country parson, the film (and Jon Spence for that matter) depict a young Jane who is not without the material and romantice hopes and fancies of other women her age and has been brought up to value romantic love and affection as well as familial, which may be at odds with her artistic ambitions. She wants to believe she can have both but there's a hint that she's torn. Ultimately she is the one who leaves Tom and cannot fathom a way to make their life together work if he gives up his uncle's support and has to take care of Jane in addition to his already large family in Ireland.

Notably, this Jane at least does not have the perfect faith in her ability to make a living as a writer that would free her from the doubts of a life of poverty were she to follow through with her elopment with Tom Lefroy. In her final speech to him before she goes back home, she will not admit the possibility that he won't be poor forever or even if he is, that a life even simpler than the one she currently has at home does not have to mean ruination and despair. She does not consider the the possibility that she could, like Mrs. Radcliffe, make enough money from the publication of her novels to assist Tom with the support of their family. Or, maybe what she has considered is that if she and Tom are cast off for eloping together, and have to live in poverty, that she won't have time to write in addition to the duties of keeping together their miserable household.

She will not marry to secure her own comfort, but neither will she marry for a love that does not come with a promise of a certain degree of comfort. What degree of comfort would ultimately satisfy her is never explored.

Tom hints at something interesting the first time they are dancing together that Jane secretly feels herself to be above her company. She cannot be satisfied; she will not settle, not even for Tom.

3. As a corollary to my criticism that the presentation of the central conflict in the film lacks focus, it also lacks a convincing conclusion. After Jane gives up the elopment and returns home, the action jumps to what is essentially the end or near the end of her life, where she has remained unmarried and Tom, apparently married, has a daughter whom, out of reverence for the memory of his love, he has named after her. There really is no explanation why their decision not to elope together in that one moment must necessarily mean the end of the relationship altogether. Why can't they wait until some other more fortuitous occasion to be married appropriately? Why doesn't Tom go out into the world to make his fortune and then come back for her (as Captain Wentworth does for Anne Eliot in Persuasion)?

They do not part because they no longer love each other. The only answer is that at some point, either he had to be inconstant or she did. Either he gave up the acquaintance or felt no hope in pursuing it if she gave him no encouragement. If they walked away thinking they each had a better chance for happiness with other people, at least Jane knows there will very likely be no other offers. She has no dowry to tempt another man. Tom on the other hand has the hope of inheriting his uncle's estate and then marrying, once he is financially independent.

I did say I liked this movie, didn't I? Ok, well, since this has gone much longer than I anticipated, I will have to deal what I liked in another post at another time.

To be continued...